ext_51924 ([identity profile] kallista85.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] obstinatrix 2011-10-03 03:27 pm (UTC)

That was beautiful. I think it would be very diffucult to anyone writing a similar story (Destiel with Cas in Sam's body), but I really appreciated your subtleness.
Sometimes it was kinda strange for me imagining certain scenes (I'm obviously referring to the one in the 3rd part, above all), in which there's only Cas in Sam's body, and Dean feels like "I love his (ie. Cas') soul, so I'm about to give a damn about a thing on whose vessel he is using". Eventually, I managed to value more the angst of the two lovers that the "picturization" of the scene, so I really didn't care anymore.

Instead it surprised me a lot that Sam was like "do whatever you want with my body, as long as there's only Cas inside, I have no problems" XD He's so supportive and caring about his brother and the angel he loves but... awkward? Maybe you wouldn't remember it, but Dean would!

Excuse me if my English is sloppy and my comments unuseful, but English is not my first language and it's also the first time ever i'm reviewing (sort of) a fic.

Is it the right place to say that also the art was amazing?

Bye!

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