Ahahaha. So I had no idea that you were writing "Tastes like good old-fashioned, proteinous, dirty man-come" for me. LOLtastic. Also? "Seriously, reminds me of being a kid, when someone would come in your mouth with no warning." just makes me think of Fight Club. "I haven't been fucked like that since grade school." But I laughed anyway.
Are we establishing a pattern of Bill with come leaking out of his mouth, to be indelicate?
Oh Bill. Oh, Bill. I just keep saying it over and over in my mind. And it's so terribly amusing how blase he is, which I love. I like knowing!Leonard, too, but apparently-clueless-yet-experienced Bill is awesome.
Aw! And then all vulnerable worried!Bill. God. Yes. Engineering this conversation but not able to really drive it--that's what I'm getting, anyway. And I love that Bill's such a liar, because it's so true, and it's always in the way that he never minds if you know he's lying, believing it isn't the point. So is it even that manipulative anymore? And then Len, turning the tables by demanding his own little manipulation, but (like the panel) you don't get the sense it's harmful or unhealthy, just how they work. The give and take is established and part of the process.
I also noticed the opposite nature of this Bill and the one from WHAS (wish I had a better name, but I hate names, and I was thinking about that film the whole time, so...), which I thought was amusing.
Anyway, I think this is awesome. And whatever I prompted, it totally has the stuff I want. It has those layers of Bill, the ones that don't make any sense except for how he's so quintessentially human. I don't actually think he's that strange. It's just that he's out there and visible and his foibles are on display. Like how you never know if he's aware that he's lying, or if he is, if he cares that you know. And it's sexy and funny and you did this very quickly which is impressive. Thank you SO much. I'm gonna read it again now! You are a goddess.
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Are we establishing a pattern of Bill with come leaking out of his mouth, to be indelicate?
Oh Bill. Oh, Bill. I just keep saying it over and over in my mind. And it's so terribly amusing how blase he is, which I love. I like knowing!Leonard, too, but apparently-clueless-yet-experienced Bill is awesome.
Aw! And then all vulnerable worried!Bill. God. Yes. Engineering this conversation but not able to really drive it--that's what I'm getting, anyway. And I love that Bill's such a liar, because it's so true, and it's always in the way that he never minds if you know he's lying, believing it isn't the point. So is it even that manipulative anymore? And then Len, turning the tables by demanding his own little manipulation, but (like the panel) you don't get the sense it's harmful or unhealthy, just how they work. The give and take is established and part of the process.
I also noticed the opposite nature of this Bill and the one from WHAS (wish I had a better name, but I hate names, and I was thinking about that film the whole time, so...), which I thought was amusing.
Anyway, I think this is awesome. And whatever I prompted, it totally has the stuff I want. It has those layers of Bill, the ones that don't make any sense except for how he's so quintessentially human. I don't actually think he's that strange. It's just that he's out there and visible and his foibles are on display. Like how you never know if he's aware that he's lying, or if he is, if he cares that you know. And it's sexy and funny and you did this very quickly which is impressive. Thank you SO much. I'm gonna read it again now! You are a goddess.