Aaaaaah, I loved this. I love stumbling across fics where the RPF is totally enmeshed in the characters, and you did it so well. I felt real urgency reading Bill's pov, real desperation and stuff. I read it all so fast, b/c it flowed so fast, like rushing water. Really awesome stuff here.

It also supports my theory that when Spock and Jim say each other's names, they're really saying "I love you", just like how in the Princess Bride, when he says 'As you wish' he's really saying "I love you." :)