Wow, so- the rimming yesyesyes, but then the poetry...I think I mean and then the poetry, because yesyesyesyesyes.
Just- everything. Poetry is really underrated in all the fandoms, I think, and I know it is twenty times harder to write a hundredth as much poetry as prose, but this was perfect. Just perfectperfectperfect.
For some reason I really like the line "choked them up like wisteria", and I love the informal rhyme pattern which you have incorporated really subtly and skillfully, and I like the endlessly circular pattern of time and perception which to me is so much what the show is about.
Anyway, thank you so much for sharing!
MS xx