Oh, really lovely! The descriptions in the beginning were just delicious. I found the transition from that eloquent language to the slightly formal tone in the end a little rough, however. It seemed to lack consistency.

Curious; I wonder at what point 'fuck' became a common curse. Seems like it's been around for 500 years but I've only heard of its common usage in the last 50.

Regardless, I love what you've done with Dean and Cas here. Each character is charming and similar to their canon selves. Bravo. :)