Dear god. Thank you for reminding me what I love about het porn. You've worked a lot of hot and an amazing amount of characterization into 400 words. That last line? So true.

I can so picture this as I read it. It's vividly written and Jared is sooo good at flirting and being hot onscreen that this really works for me. Even though this is short, I'm adding it to my Reader as favorite for repeat reading. Thank you!