obstinatrix: (insert Leonard here)
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Title: Friday Night, Late
Pairing: Shatnoy
Rating: R
Disclaimer: liiiiiiiiiies!
Summary: Leonard arrives at Bill's apartment, rained on. They have sex. Wow, what a plot.




Leonard comes to him, solemn and slow, when they've argued, he and his wife in their marriage like an eggshell splintering. He is soaking wet, tonight, pale blue shirt soaked dark to his skin, mouth downturned and tight with too much not-saying. Bill is alone in his poorly-lit apartment, the small rooms growing larger as darkness falls. Leonard's face is downcast, but his heart thrills to the sight of it all the same.

His mouth tastes of whisky and the rain. His lips are cold, but the press of his tongue is hot and fierce against Bill's; his shirt is seeping a damp patch into Bill's sweater. Bill manhandles him down the short hallway without any great difficulty; shoves him down onto the nearest couch and straddles his damp-denimed thighs. Leonard rocks up, hums into the tangling of their mouths. Bill threads his fingers through the fine hair plastered to Leonard's forehead, stroking it back with a gentleness that sets the tips of his fingers tingling. Leonard is cold, but the heat of their bodies burns through the chill like the morning sun through mist.

The retention of Leonard's soaking clothes is illogical. Bill thinks this, breathes it warm and soft into Leonard's ear until Leonard shivers and licks at Bill's jaw, and then sets himself to unfastening Leonard's buttons. His own sweater, still mostly dry, is easily shucked, but Leonard's clings to his wet-shine skin as Bill peels it away; crumples into a sopping ball when he discards it. He ducks his head to lick the chill from Leonard's clavicle, the hollow of his neck, the bone-hard point of his shoulder. Leonard makes a tight sound, caught in the back of his throat.

The shift of their bodies together is a familiar escalation, this slow spread of sparks between their thighs. Bill's jeans, though, are very much in the way, and Leonard's are repulsively sodden; and so, reluctantly, he pulls himself to his feet, one hand still braced on Leonard's shoulder as he unbuttons himself, kicking the offending garments to the floor. Leonard's require more attention, both of his hands fumbling at the buttons and tugging the wet fabric down his legs, but Bill is loath to break off contact completely, so he leans forward to lick back into Leonard's mouth, sucking on his lower lip as he battles with buttons and boots. Leonard is breathless, and his beautiful hands wander everywhere.

Their nakedness sliding together draws a groan from them both, a rasping sound that hitches as he sets to rocking. Leonard whimpers, head tilting back against the cushions, and Bill leans down to lick at his jaw, at his ear. The rhythm comes to them easily, the grind of their groins setting breath ratcheting as fingers fumble and grip, Leonard's digging into Bill's shoulderblades hard enough to bruise. The rhythm of their kiss follows it, echoes it, a hot dark clinging that resonates deep in the jaw. "Oh," pants Leonard, "oh - fuck - " and Bill wraps a hand in answer around them both.

And then there is nothing but this feedback loop of heat, slickness and shivers and the heel of his hand's fierce friction. The kiss becomes sloppy, more tongue and less coordination, until Leonard pulls away with a frustrated groan and thrusts up hard into Bill's fist. Bill rasps out " - fuck!" with his mouth pressed to the hollow of Leonard's throat; arches over him, shudders and clenches and comes. His hand moves spasmodically, spreading his own sticky heat, until Leonard cries out, back pulling tight before the movements of his hips go liquid. Bill melts down onto him then, rubs their mouths together and presses against him, and clings.

"I see we've made a mess," says Leonard, when he can speak. Bill laughs a little, detaching himself with an effort.

"Not a problem," he says, and pulls himself to his feet. Leonard raises a questioning eyebrow. Bill only smiles in answer; sinks to his knees and sets his hands on Leonard's thighs. Leonard barely has time to widen his eyes before Bill's tongue is lapping at his abdomen, licking their stickying whiteness from his skin. Leonard's fingers twist gently in Bill's hair as Bill takes the spent cock in his mouth, lapping and sucking and soothing until he is clean. When Bill pulls himself to his feet again, Leonard's eyes have gone black. Bill smirks.

"You slut," Leonard laughs, pulling Bill back into his arms. Bill goes willingly, wrapping himself in Leonard's warmth; kissing his ear and his throat and the curve of his smile. Smiles are hard-earned, on nights like this one, and Bill knows better than to take such a reward for granted.

He is warmed now, though, laughing and dry and uncoiled, and Bill kisses him until he stops laughing and returns the kisses properly; until Leonard lifts him and lays him on his back on the rug. Bill raises his hips, wraps his legs around Leonard's waist. "Again?" he laughs back, eyebrow raised in inquiry.

"Again," says Leonard, "and again, if I say so. Hmm?"

"Mmm," Bill agrees, and pulls him down by the hair.

Bill isn't so speedy when the mess encompasses most of the room. Fortunately, one can always buy another coffee table. Unlike Leonards, they actually do grow on trees.

Date: 2010-02-05 04:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ema-load.livejournal.com
oh, i loved this. you made my crappy afternoon all better.

and i like your icon!

Date: 2010-02-05 04:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] obstinatrix.livejournal.com
Writing this at work made my crappy afternoon better, too, so I'm glad it performed dual functions. :D

Date: 2010-02-05 05:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lemon31.livejournal.com
Beautifully written as always ♥

The last line made me laugh out loud! Nice bit of humour to make up for the angst.

Unlike Leonards, they actually do grow on trees.

Date: 2010-02-05 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] obstinatrix.livejournal.com
*grins* Thank you, hon.

Date: 2010-02-05 06:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] candesgirl.livejournal.com
No one writes them like you do. No one. It's fucking brilliant and hot and always has this tinge of desperation and sadness that is absofuckinglutely perfect. Gah, I love it and you for writing it. Well, I love you anyway, actually, this just makes it that much better, I get to fangirl you.

Damn.

Date: 2010-02-05 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] obstinatrix.livejournal.com
I love you tooooo, comm daddy, but you know that. :) Thank you. I was feeling the need for them, recently. The world needs more Shatnoy porn, and they were doing this in my head today at work so I thought I might as well write it down, while it was there!

Date: 2010-02-05 07:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starcrossedgirl.livejournal.com
ASjshdkfhjd, I have already told you how incoherent this makes me, but yes. I love the desperate edge it has to it, at the start, and then the mellowing out throughout, and wet clothes have never been this weirdly attractive.

Also, I've started noted a pattern wherein somehow you manage to turn the moments right after the sex even hotter than the sex itself, or the lead up? I don't know how you manage it, but this sentence: "Again," says Leonard, "and again, if I say so. Hmm?" makes my heart explode with joy and UNF.

Date: 2010-02-05 07:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starcrossedgirl.livejournal.com
noting a pattern, damnit. WHERE IS MY EDIT BUTTON.

Date: 2010-02-05 09:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] obstinatrix.livejournal.com
IT DESERTED YOU, BB. <333333

Date: 2010-02-05 09:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] obstinatrix.livejournal.com
Well, as I was saying last night, I love the after-sex parts; I frequently end up with some kind of morning after in my fics, or post-sex banter, or something like that, because I often find it frustrating when the fic just - cuts. I mean, what happened then? Where is my snuggling, dammit? ;) So, thank you, I am delighted that you like those parts too.

And, yes, I couldn't resist the little suggestions of dom!Len, I hold my hands up there. Unnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnf, never enough.

Date: 2010-02-05 09:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starcrossedgirl.livejournal.com
Entirely agreed about mornings after, there needs to be more of them, in fic. Emotional connections, people. The afterglow is a precious thing.

Never ever ever. Damnit, I still want a Leonard Tree.

Date: 2010-02-05 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illariy.livejournal.com
Oh, lovely. I like the mix of hotness and sadness, that there's still something they can't have. *happy sigh*

Date: 2010-02-05 09:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] obstinatrix.livejournal.com
Thank you!

God, yes, there's always something good about illicitness, isn't there?

Date: 2010-02-05 09:39 pm (UTC)
my_daroga: (star trek)
From: [personal profile] my_daroga
Oh, man, they were right. Gorgeous. You are the best, you really are. And your porn always has so much character; it wouldn't be nearly so hot without the little bitternesses and absurdities.

Date: 2010-02-05 11:35 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-02-05 11:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anoncomment7.livejournal.com
Oooo, thank you for such good, achy smut. I'm sick as a dog atm, and can't do much more than lay in bed, sneezing my head off, reading porn. (Oh, darn?) Anyway, I always love your fics, and I was happy to see a new one waiting for me. XD

Anon7

Date: 2010-02-10 10:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] obstinatrix.livejournal.com
Glad to have been of some help! :)

Date: 2010-02-06 12:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kirk-slave.livejournal.com
Look I don't even know what to say about this. Shatnoy have been on my brain for the entire day and now I come home to this beautiful, intense escapade. Wonderful thank you so very much, as usual for your fabulous stories.

Date: 2010-02-07 09:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] klashfor.livejournal.com
See this is why Shatnoy is one of my all time favourite comms. The pure brilliance people produce. Love.

Date: 2010-02-10 10:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] obstinatrix.livejournal.com
:D Thank you!

Date: 2010-02-08 11:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sookail.livejournal.com
Oh. Wow. This was hot and amazing and desperate and hot and...
Much *<3* for your writing :)

Date: 2010-02-10 10:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] obstinatrix.livejournal.com
<333333333333 thank you!

Date: 2010-02-08 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coeurdesoleil.livejournal.com
....

I'm kinda lost for words here; this was intense, and hot, and beautiful, so very, very beautiful!

<3333333

Date: 2010-02-10 10:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] obstinatrix.livejournal.com
Thank you, sweetie. :)
From: [identity profile] den68-dion.livejournal.com
How many have you written woman...God I think I am gonna start writing them now besides Jim and SPock
cAN YOU IMAGINE THE POSSIBILITIES...NO FUCKIN LOGIC IN THE WAY JUST MAD SEX....CRAZY SEX...DAMN SHIT THEY'RE MARRIED THOUGH...WELL THEY DON'T HAVE TO KNOW....THEY HAVE BEEN DOING EACH OTHER FOR THE PAST 40 YEARS...COME ON IT IS SO BLOODY OBVIOUS............LOL...One question..IN your stories like the rain one how old are they ...jus so I CAN VISUALIZE...THANKS AGAIN..GONNA GO FIND SOME MORE SHATNOY....LOVE YOU GIRL ...............

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