'DVD commentary' meme

What the hell? I'm at work for the next four hours and I will undoubtedly be very bored very soon. So, from screamlet:


Pick a paragraph (or any passage less than 500 words) from any story I've written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the fic, lots of awful puns, and anything else that you'd expect to find on a DVD commentary track.

Annnnnnnd go.

Sadly, I doubt I can get away with writing Shatnoy porn at work, even though I want to.

Snippet: The Mirror Cracked (R)

Found this on the Trek RPF kinkmeme. Hmm. Here for archiving purposes, really.

Title: The Mirror Cracked
Pairing: Leonard/Zach
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Lies!
Notes/Summary: Teeny-weeny self-indulgent thing drawing on my narcissism kink. Yes, the one usually satisfied by writing Bill Shatner/Jim Kirk. I don't even know.

( Most of all, he wants him for his face. )

Fic: Friday Night, Late (R)

Title: Friday Night, Late
Pairing: Shatnoy
Rating: R
Disclaimer: liiiiiiiiiies!
Summary: Leonard arrives at Bill's apartment, rained on. They have sex. Wow, what a plot.


( Leonard comes to him, solemn and slow, when they've argued )